I was going for a specific feeling in this. I'm not sure I got it, but there's something there.
Drabble: Rescued
Icy wind pummeled the window. A contrast from the heat radiating from the body snuggled against me. The hint of salty tears assaulted my nose.
Tears that he had shed when I reddened his backside. He says I save him every time he goes across my lap. Saves him from his mistakes. From getting lost in his guilt.
My heart aches every time. I don’t pretend it hurts me more than him. The ache comes from knowing he saves me as much as I save him.
Through the pain and tears. Repentance and forgiveness. I know, we’ve rescued each other.
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Nice little drabble, Dizzy, and love the message it contains. I need something small like this to hopefully re-charge my engines.
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I’m so glad you liked this, Jodie. I hope it does help inspire you to start writing as well! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this!
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